End sequence

Good reviews

The feedback we got given from the class was the story as a whole which the class enjoyed very much. They enjoyed the whole parkour segment of the sequence as it gave a sense of urgency which is what we were looking for in the story. Also the Matrix style 180 degree spin around Lee and myself pointing guns at each other worked very well. The class thought the pace of the editing was good and it ran fluently, also the music enhanced the sequence. The shot where Ben punches the camera as a point of view shot of Lee worked very well. Also the sound effects we used for punches and the 180 degree spin the group thought worked really well.

The areas of improvement

what the group said to improve the sequence was to turn down the music slightly when there is dialogue, as well as turn the volume down when there is wind as it distracted them from the dialogue and also take the sound out from the equipment as you can hear the from the tracking shots the dolly moving.

Also near the end where Ben is introduced into the fight scene, that introduction could have been more creative maybe using different shots and camera angles.

The shot with Lee saying bad language made the group lose the plot of the story and gave it a feeling as though it was not planned or rehearsed.

Another improvement the group said was for the characters to wear costume to make the sequence look more believable, this also made the sequence looks as though it was unplanned. The last improvement the class said was to make the end fight scene longer and by planning it and story boarding it, it makes the fight look much more realistic.